11.06.09

New Editor

Posted in Uncategorized at 12:07 am by lillierose

Hi im Lillie Rose and i will be helping out on Packer’s stories, so  far i have written 2 stories , one when i was 6 , and one when i was 9. and i  hope to acomplish alot and blaaah blaah blaaahhh, ya know what i mean

10.28.09

World War III: Rebellion Prologue

Posted in Uncategorized at 9:00 pm by Ktman

Prologue

Three black fighter planes took off from the distant coast of China, quickly coming upon the Pacific Ocean.  Silently they flew, making no more sound then the waves in the ocean below them.  They flew so quickly that if you blinked you would miss them, as if you could see them at all.  Their black coats of paint made them melt into the night sky.

Suddenly, the planes split apart, now traveling in three different directions, in such ghostly unison it would have been a shocking sight to see, that is if anyone was actually there as a witness.

The shore of another country came into view, glowing in the night sky.  It was the United States of America.  As planned, they were definitely not expecting an attack, much less the start of a great war.

When the planes reached the shore they almost instantly reached their destinations; Los Angeles, San Francisco, and Sacramento.  As the planes reached their destinations they simultaneously released their cargo, a black tube with a chinese flag on it about the size of a computer monitor, and quickly turned around and headed back to where they came from.

They cargo they held where atomic bombs.  Three major cities were destroyed in one fateful night.  Millions perished.

The third world war had begun.

The Story of a Soldier- Results

Posted in Uncategorized at 1:17 am by ~βã↑ιη↑Γéη€Ηé™ The ACP 3ic

Well it looks like FoxCpNews has given their opinion on whether or not I should kepp writing my story. We had

5 Cs

1 A

and a D (Yeah we’re a smart bunch aren’t we? :lol: )

Well I suppose that the answer C meant A, so I will be continuing my story. I should have the next chapter out ion a couple days! Seeya next time guys!

10.25.09

Should I continue my Story?

Posted in Uncategorized at 7:41 pm by ~βã↑ιη↑Γéη€Ηé™ The ACP 3ic

Hey guys, Batin here. I have been pondering the thought of continuing writing my Story of A soldier story lately. If you want ta then just vote :]

Options are:

A. Yes continue it, I liked it VERY much :>

B. Nowai, go die in a hole Batin

C. Pie (recommended)

ACP Mysteries 1: Halloween Time

Posted in Uncategorized at 12:00 am by cat18688

This story contains bloody massacres, romance, and many times of teamwork. I would rate this PG, children 7 and under should not read this.

Prolouge

One day in the campsite of ACP, Cat, Uno, Ed, Pinki, Fox and Eric were hanging out by the ocean. Cat was busy collecting firewood for the ceremony that night. Fox and Uno got in a splash fight, Eric was setting up decorations, Ed was watching Cat, and Pinki was looking out of the binoculars. “I can’t believe it’s that time of year again. Getting to party all night. Anniversaries ROCK!” Cat cheered and threw the firewood into the air, blushed, then picked them up as fast as she could. “True, but I just have a weird feeling in my gut.” Ed sniffled, sneezed, then went back to watching Cat. “EWW! Boy germs!” Pinki joked. Cat just then glimpsed a shadow of something, but then it was gone. She shrugged it off guessing it was just an animal, then went back to collecting wood.

Chapter 1

ACP members were scattered everywhere around the huge bonfire. From Keyser, to Nessa – even Ennbay was there. Cat took a seat next to Ed and Pinki. “My fellow ACP members, we are here today to celebrate the anniversary of ACP. I, Eric, would like to say that you have all done a great job! Now, PARTY!!!” We all got up and started dancing to the music Fox had put on. Uno ran toward the snacks, and grabbed some candy. I then realized I forgot my book at the Cove, so I walked over to Batin. “Hey Batin, can you go get my book from the Cove? It’s called The Battle of the Labyrinth” He turned to me. “Oh sure! Be right back with it!” And he ran off.

Later that night after the party. “Whoo! That rocked!” Ed exclaimed. “I can’t wait to read my book!” I said, but then I realized, Batin hadn’t been back yet. “Hey guys, have you seen Batin?” I asked them. “Nope” Pinki shrugged. A cold chill went through me. I hope he was okay. Eric then announced, “ACP Members! Everyone grab a walkie-talkie and search for the ACP soldier Batintrenche!” I saw everyone run to grab one, then run in different directions. I got one then went toward the Cove. “Batin!?” I called out, no answer. I heard a twig snap. “Batin is that you?” Just then something tackled me and got me down on the ground. I couldn’t see who, it was pitch black. “Ah, another victim for me to kill.” said the person. I saw a knife shimmer in their hand. Flashlights shone from the forest, and I caught a glimpse of the person’s shirt. It was covered in blood and was a darkish blue. I’ve seen that shirt before, I thought to myself, but, could it be? I was then interrupted by Eric and Fox. “Cat oh my god! Are you okay!?” Fox whispered nervously. I nodded but kept silent. “Who was that?” Eric asked. I shrugged, and said that I recognized the shirt, but I couldn’t see the face. “Where’s Batin?” Fox asked. I took her flashlight and I pointed it at a body lying on the ground, covered in blood. Fox screeched. Batin was found alright, but he wasn’t alive. Batin was murdered.

10.22.09

Should I come back for a while?

Posted in Uncategorized at 12:28 pm by packer1nfl

 

Hi guys it’s Packer. I’ve been thinking alot about this, but I’m too torn so you all decide:

Should I come back for a while (unwritten amount of time):

A. HECK YEAH YOU IDIOT!

B. Its up to you…

C. NO WAY GET LOST LOSER!

10.21.09

Would Like To Know

Posted in Uncategorized at 11:32 pm by klug1234

I would like to know who edited Chapter 3 of Uprise and wrote that Apo’s head got ripped off. Do not mess with my story.

Thanks,

Klug

10.19.09

Uprise: Chapter 3

Posted in Uncategorized at 5:08 pm by klug1234

Chapter 3: nIkP Samias

As we approached Breeze, i radioed Dry.

“We have Person and we’re approaching Breeze.” I said to Dry.

“Ok, good, we have Iceyfeet here too. We need to have a meeting, and quick.” Came the reply.

We landed on Breeze and we escorted Person to the meeting room. Kt and Fox walked in with Person. We walked in after them and closed the door. The leaders of ACP and Icey were sitting in chairs around a table. We all grabbed chairs and sat down.

“Ok,” said Dry. “Who has any ideas as to why this may have happened? Why have all the armies suddenly turned on their leaders?”

I stood up. “Remember the rebellion ACP had a few months ago? One of their leaders, Mitch, got away. But suppose that other armies were involved in it? The last thing Mitch said to me before fleeing was ‘This isnt the end, this is just the beginning.’ What if other armies were in on the plot?”

Person sighed. “Dammit, i shouldve known. I think Mitch met with Aka a few days before he took over.” Everyones head snapped up.

“What?!” Demanded Dry. Person shrugged. “He was seen by a low ranking officer going into a place where Aka was. I didnt believe him.” Now Dry sighed.

“Well, that stinks. Now there is something else i must ask. You two will be supporting us in the upcoming war, i suppose?” Kt started. “Wait, who said anything about a war?”

Dry stood up. “There is no possible way that we cannot avoid a war. UMA has been overthrown. The loyalist IW has won their small civil war. They will be helping us. We are practicly alone. We must win.”

Just then, a voice came over the intercom. It was a loud voice, and it demanded attention. “Hello ACP.” We all froze. None of us had said that. It was not a voice any of us recognized. “We are coming for you. The war has begun. I have returned for my vengeance. Prepare to be destroyed. Yours truly, nIkP Samias.”

Meat was the first to recover. “Who the hell was that?”

Packer shrugged. “I dont know, but they definetly arent in ACP.”

Fox got a confused look on her face. “nIkP Samias, Who the heck is that?”

“I dont know,” I said. “But we have to find out.” Right after i said this,  a burst of yelling came out of  Dry’s radio. “Sir, were under attack.” said a soldier through it. “Its the UMA-theyre attacking! Send backup immeadietly! OH MY GOD, ITS PINK-ITS PINK, IT JUST RIPPED OFF APO’S HEAD -” The line went dead.

10.16.09

The Trick: Chapter 3

Posted in Uncategorized at 4:22 pm by Pinkgirl3919

Chapter 3

“C’mon Jenny, gotta catch up!” said Jenny’s friend, Jenny was behind her swimming after. Jenny soon caught up, Jenny’s friend met up with the others. “Hey everyone!” said one of Jenny’s other friend, “Oh, hey!” said everyone in a chorus. “Attention please! May I have your attention please?” said an old man stepping onto platform that was cutting the pool almost in half. Everyone started swimming towards the platform to hear what the man had to say, there was alot of splashing noise, Jenny and her friends swam towards the platform where the old man was standing.

“Hello,” said the old man “My name is Joe. I’m your host for today.” That’s Joe?! I didn’t think of him as a old man… thought Jenny, “These are gonna be your co-hosts today,” said Joe pointing at some other adults, they weren’t old though. As Joe pointed to them, they waved. Some waved back, Jenny kept her hands and arms down and didn’t wave, she looked around to find Walrus’ with Top Hats’ banners around the pool area on the wall touching the ceiling, Jenny swam back a little and lightly hitted the edge of the pool.

The Trick: Chapter 2

Posted in Uncategorized at 3:46 am by Pinkgirl3919

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Chapter 2

Jenny woke up to the sound of her alarm clock, she hit the “Snooze” button and got up. It’s Saturday, today is that Pool Party.. thought Jenny. Jenny got dressed, and got her swimsuit and towl and put it in a bag. She went to the front door and got out her cell phone, “Hey, when r u heading to the party?” texted Jenny to one of her friends, “I’m heading there rite now if you want to come with me, I’ll be passing your house in a second” text back her friend. “Oh, okay so u soon.” texted Jenny, then she went outside, and looked down the street, she saw someone walking down and thought it was probably one of her friends.

It was her friend after all, she walked down the driveway and met her friend down by the street, they walked and talked for the rest of the way to the party “I’m excited for the party, are you?” asked Jenny’s friend, “Oh, yes, I am.” said Jenny, looking away. After 10 minutes, they arrived at the pool, they went into the locker rooms are changed into their swimsuits. They went to the pool area and it looked like the whole school was there. “Woo hoo!!!” said Jenny’s friend running and jumping into the pool. Jenny walked up to the pool and jumped into the pool.

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