Acp Story: Revenge of the Last
Revenge Of The Last
an acp story By Lillie~ Rose
Prolouge
“What the?” The scientist murmured. He looked on his computer screen again.
The pattern of waves looked fine, but the computer was still scanning. It had gone all night like this.
The scientist shook his head. “We need more funding…. all we got are these crappy computers that glitch up every few seconds”
And so the scientist left the lab that day and didn’t come back untill a few days later.
“Woah!” He exclaimed when he saw the waves.
It looked like a worm was digging through them, changing their shape or cutting them short. The second set of waves that was for space was shaking rapidly.
“Oh no, no, no!” He had to check one last thing.
He scrolled down to ‘Voice Command’.
“Prediction for Page 1″ he ordered timidly.
A second page came up. The computer showed how the waves would change over a course of weeks, untill finally, the whole thing collapsed.Then it evaporated.
“Oh”
“My”
“God”
And the scientist fainted, and it was not a week later untill the police found him, in a hole under his house hogging a stash of food.
So the police ordered his boss to come pick him up.
When he came, the police shoved the scientist, who was secured in a straight jacket, inside a black limo.
As the driver was busy driving the head scientist turned around and faced him.
“Sorry buddy, but it’s obvious your not going to tell us anything…” The head scientist took out something sharp from his coat.
“But I guess ur memories will” And he shoved the sharp object into his head, which then melted his skull and absorbed a piece of his brain.
The poor scientist screamed and ripped apart his straight jacket to clutch the sharp object, and died.
“What a day, what a day” His boss murmured. He took out his phone.
“Is this HQ? Well yeah, I have it. And the files from his computer? Hmm. I see”
“Well I guess we have to call them in. No not the troops. THEM. Well of course I know they aren’t even 18 yet, thats why we need them” He continued.
“Look no more questions, how soon will the portal be ready?”A small voice awnsered.
“Ok that should give us enough time to round them up” He closed his phone.
As the black limo drove into a dirt road, the driver cast a dark glance around.
“I think this is the wrong road….” The head scientist looked around.
“That’s the least of your worries” The driver said in an in-human voice.
“What the….” The scientist reached in for his weapon.
“Not so fast” The monster said and his ‘tongue’ extended out and grabbed him by the throat.
“I need YOUR memories” The monster said with a laugh.
“Never!” The head scientist choked out and took out his weapon.
“And what are you going to do with that? Those bullets don’t effect me, only something with solar energy or a light in it”
“THIS!” he screamed and pulled the trigger on his own head.
“NOOOO” The monster roared and flung the two dead bodies out of the car.
“NO NO NO!” He screamed again and changed to his true form. He ran on thick long legs in to the forest nearby.
Though what he didn’t know about was the tape recorder inside the head scientist’s pocket.
And when a second car came by and picked up that tape recorder, it gave a very important hint of how to win the future war, for the future.
Chapter 1: Lillierose/ Lillian: I fall down a flight of stairs
I walked on a creepy empty street. Your everyday ghost town complete with broken down houses, sand dunes in the distance, and tumble weed. It was even sunset, so the shadows looked sinister.
For some reason I knew that I was being followed. I had some wierd six-sense thingy like that. Ever since I had gotten sucked into my computer and ended up in a war with some Android things(who wanted to take our magnistism because they thought that we didn’t need it or something)
But anyway, I knew that I was dreaming, and sometimes my dreams come true. So I forced myself not to run.
I walked, and walked, and walked some more.
Suddenly I heard foot steps behind me, and I wiped my head around. My kick-butt senses were kicking in.
My stalkers looked like people from “The Men In Black”(Complete in black suites) Except that they had really long tongue things.
“What do you want?” I demanded. They didn’t answer. They kept walking, closer and closer. My feet felt like someone thought it would be funny to chain some boulders to them, which is not funny at all.
I couldn’t run, they were gaining on me, and I was 99.99% sure that they weren’t human.
Suddenly a very dark shadow loomed infront of me, and I had a feeling that it wasn’t a statue.
I looked up, and screamed.
I shot out of bed and continued screaming. For a split second i felt like i was falling into my floor.
“Oh my god, oh my god” I panted.
I was used to having nightmares, seeing 8 year olds blowing up into smitherines and their guts and blood splattering across your face and yada-yada-yada, that kind of thing.
Except I didn’t reconize these people.
And i knew they were real people.
And i knew that i had dreamed some wierd version of the future.
Which wasn’t a very good future.
By the time I had finished breakfast, I barely remember half of it.
Then I trugged back upstairs to watch some Saturday Cartoons.
Execpt my Tv had been smashed, and bits of glass dappled my floor.
“What the?” I demanded.
My window was still closed and locked, like I left it before i went to sleep. And i’m pretty sure i would have noticed that my Tv was broken when i woke up.
Put two and two togther and you get this: someone snuck into into my house somehow while i was eating break fast and smashed my Tv for no appearant reason.
I was mad, real mad. I wanted to punch someones face in. Maybe go scream at my parents? But i haven’t seen them at all today. And it was then, that I realized……..
I was home alone.
“M-mom? D-D-ad?” I cried.
“Anyone?” I was panicing.
I had two brothers, two dogs and a mom and a dad.
Families don’t just go ‘Poof!’ and disappear?
They don’t right?
I sat down, ignoring the glass the pinched my skin.
” I won’t cry. Just cuz they’re not here doesn’t mean their..d-d-e-a” I couldn’t say the last word.
Suddenly I heard a crash down stairs.
I knew what to do.
I slid over to my bed on my knees.
I took out a box hidden in the mattress.
And I took out a shotgun.
And then I ran out of my room, leaped over the banister, dropped seven feet do the stairs, and dashed to the kitchen.
You see, being in The army gives you alot of training.
Alot of Epic Training
“Freeze” I shouted at the person in my kitchen.
Chapter 2 Lillie Rose/Lillian: I torture a secret agent.
I felt incredibly stupid. And i just wanted to slap myself.
And I was very glad nobody was watching. You don’t understand?
Well let my paint a picture for you.
A girl still in her pajamas with morning hair, pointing a shotgun at a dog that has baraque sauce all over it’s golden face, looking very guilty.
Adrenaline was still rocketing through my body, so it took me a while to relax enough to put my gun won.
“Chance!” I shouted.
I was mad, very mad.
And I guess Chance knew that, so he darted past me.
Smart dog.
“Chance!” I screamed and chased him.
Then I heard growling and barking and somebody screeching in pain.
Well not exactly.
Well you see, when I walked into my doorway, I saw my dog licking some stranger to death.
Yes licking him to death.
“Chance!” I commanded “get off of him!”
My dog stepped off of the man and sat next to him, watching him like a hawk (as much as dogs can)
“Who are you, and what do you want!” I said, pointing the gun at him.
The man obviously did not expect a 12 year old girl with bed head and a dog that would start chewing on his face at any moment when he decided to come to an apparently”vacant” house.
The man did not reply. He just stared at me with his mouth hanging open.
“I’ll say it again,” I steamed, trying to lose my temper “Who are you and what do you want!”
“That information is classified” The stranger said, trying to act formal.
“Listen bud,” I began through gritted teeth ” If it were me, i would tell the one with the gun everything they know”
The man laughed “I have been trained to surpass every kind of torture there is, so what it is going to be? Knives? Starvation? Drowning? Or even tieing me to a tree and leaving me in the wilderness?”
“No, worse!” I said with a smile.
“Get him chance!” And my dog jumped on his chest and began to lick all over his face again.
I gave the guy 10 minutews.
He broke in 5.
“I’ll tell you! I tell you everything i know…” He began to sob.
“Ok, first who are you?” I began.
“I am a secret agent known as 1456, in squad 110. I am in charge of keeping checks and recalls” He said in a very creepy monotone voice.
“Ok, and why are you here?”
“Like i’ve said. Im in charge of checks and recalls. You have been recalled”
“For what?” I said puzzled.
“For a very special mission”
“Ok, and why are you sneaking in my house? I do have a doorbell you know” I demanded
“Well, Im actually supossed to kidnap you”
“Yeah and your doing a great job” I said as i rolled my eyes.
“I did not expect you to have help,” He said, looking pointedly at my dog “or a gun”
“Well,” I began, but the doorbell rang.
“Crap! Umm, umm” I looked around.
I found a piece of rope and tied the agent.
“Be quiet!” And i did the old fashion way of hiding him in the closet.
“Hellooo?” I asked and opened the door.
And screamed.
Chapter 3: Lillie Rose/Lillian:
Speeder (who’s real name I wont reveal) stood covered in sweat and panting at my porch.
My dog began to bark immediatley at our sweaty guest, and i had to hold him back.
“Umm, hi Speeder?” I asked, not sure what to do.
“WE’VE GOT TO HIDE, THEIR COMING AFTER ME, NO TIME TO SPARE!” He suddenly burst, and said this all at once.
“Why?!”
“Look, I’ll explain when we r out of danger, their already close” Speeder panted.
I’ve had a crazy morning.
“I think I know where we can hide” I said as calmly as i could.
“But….” I said as i dragged out my to-be kidnapper.
“Wh-?” He began but Icut him off “Long story, tell you later when we aren’t about to die”
I untied the man and said: “Look, you can run, hide, or whatever. But just don’t give us away!”
“I’ll stick with you. I’ll tell you all i know about the situation” The man said formaly.
“Then, LETS GO!” Speeder shouted and I lead up the stairs and came into my room.
“Why is your Tv sma-” He began but I cut him off again. “Our little friend here thought i was hiding in the tv or something” I rolled my eyes.
“I didn’t expect you to be so out in the open, It’s not my fault I’m so cautious”
“What ever”
Chance was still following us barking happily.
“Shut up!” Speeder smacked his muzzle, not hard but enough to make him feel bad.
I slid to the bed on my knees.
A gun wasn’t the only thing I hid under my bed.
I pulled out a trap door with lead to stone stairs.
“Cool” Speeder said with admiration.
“Let’s just get in!” And at that exact moment my front door was kicked open.
“GO!GO!GO!” I shouted and moved my bed over so we could get in.
Chance ran down first and agent 1456 followed.
“SPEEDER GET IN!” I shouted as I heard heavy foot steps stomping up the stairs, but Speeder was frozen with fear, So i had to push him in.
I jumped down and pulled the bed back over the trap door and closed the door right before they stormed in. But all i could see was thick rubber boots.
I opened the door a little bit more.
“Not here”, a low voice said gruffly. “They must have saved this family”
“What about the one that escaped?”
“There is nothing we can do about that, right now”
“Shall we got about our plans as usual?”
“Yes, luckily the humans have invented something that can block their sun’s UV rays”
“How foolish of them” The high-pitch voice peeped.
“It is actually used for rain, but it works just as well on sunlight. I think it’s called an umbrella”
The bigger of the two pulled out a something that suspicously looked like a gun.
“Let’s decimate this place” They both said with a laugh and began to shoot their weapon around, blasting oven-sized holes everywhere.
Then, as only I could do, I took a surprised step when a blast came close to my face and I slammed down the steps, making ALOT of noise.
“Owwww….” I moaned loudly, unable to help myself.
Steps pounded closer, and I heard my bed being lifted up.
“A trap door! This is where they must be hiding” The bigger one said.
Suddenly Speeder exploded out of the trap door, holding a…….
“Get back! Get back!” Speeder shouted.
To my surprise the wierdos (or what ever their called) took a leap back, grunting with surprise.
“This is one of our weapons the A-C-P has to stop you!” Speeder commanded.
I laid my head down with exhaustion. This wasn’t one of my best days.
Suddenly Speeder dropped down, grinning like he just won the lottery.
He was still holding his “weapon”.
It was a……………………………….
Flash Light.
“What the? How did u do that?” I demanded.
“Well, I heard what they said, and I had a crazy idea. It was just lying around so I picked it up and started waving it around at them, screaming “This is a weapon. Blah blah blah”.” He said carelessly.
“But how did u think to do that?” I pushed further.
“I heard what they said about sunlight and umbrellas, and I figured the light from a flash light looked real enough to make them think its real” He said with a shrug and a smile.
“Gaah!” I said.
Man, I will never understand boys.
“Anyway, you both got some explanin’ to do” I said with a glare at both of them.
“And first off, would you mind telling me your real name? Or atleast a name thats easier to say” I pointed at whats-his-face.




●ƒaяι∂●ƒaяι∂-∂яєω|a¢ρ~ℓт.¢σℓσηєℓ|ι.тσℓ∂.уσυ.ι.ѕєє.ιт said,
April 18, 2010 at 11:44 am
Scientific Lillie..
●ƒaяι∂●ƒaяι∂-∂яєω|a¢ρ~ℓт.¢σℓσηєℓ|ι.тσℓ∂.уσυ.ι.ѕєє.ιт said,
April 18, 2010 at 11:45 am
I only read half of it…jk
Mchappy said,
April 18, 2010 at 12:41 pm
Ooo scary =o !
speeder109 said,
April 28, 2010 at 11:46 pm
in the android story i was about to get on chat when everyone was taken away. As soon as i got on everyone disapeared
Dryvit said,
May 12, 2010 at 12:15 am
Wow, that is good
●zaяa●|a¢ρ~¢σℓσηєℓ| said,
May 13, 2010 at 11:04 pm
MORE LILLIE MORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE C’MON WRITE =D
Dryvit said,
May 26, 2010 at 5:08 pm
Still good and getting better
Pinkgirl3919 said,
May 26, 2010 at 10:07 pm
Interesting..
caitlynann4 said,
May 27, 2010 at 1:39 am
MORE MORE MORE I WANTS TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Roy2165 said,
June 2, 2010 at 12:28 am
woot!! you gonna make another story continued from this? really curious to see what happens
caitlynann4 said,
June 18, 2010 at 1:08 pm
write more
Cait said,
June 24, 2011 at 9:48 pm
Lol look at my old comments, over a year old (smirk)